Just what the hell have I done - TwoSurprises

Inoran said:
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Hmm, not sure what is up....try this one:

-> http://rm-fr.com/twosurprises/TwoSurprises.h264.320x240.500kbps.mov

I'm working a new version that incorporates some of the feedback that I've received on this forum:

- remove cheesy stock scream
- add POV shot before she crosses the street
- color correction (my initial CC makes a *huge* difference)
- continue to shrink download size

There are a few things that I can't fix...but oh well. Then, I swear on my cat's life, I'm setting this down so I can continue pre-production on my next one.

-mb
 
Hi,
I Would Like To Know Which Tripod Where You Using In This Photos. Would You Mind Commenting Your Opinion About It?
Thanks
 
i liked the movie good lighting, did u use and CC on ur short ?? and i agree with her crossing the street u never see her crossing u could cut to her crossing seeing her from the front then cut from her going from the back in a wide shot making it acroos the street, then to a tighter shot of her acroos the street and running to the house, but i liked it ur actors were very good , the only false acting i felt a little was when the husband screaming at the end , not saying thats not what he should be doing just didnt feel his emtion right there as feeling real , but other then that there acting was great use them both again, and u could`ve fillmed reaction shot the same time u did get the shots of them saying suprise , or u could just fillmed all again even if they werent at the location back against a blank white wall performing there reaction a CU to there face, all in all i liked ur short but i felt bad she died at the end didnt guess that but did guess the suprize party part.

peace n luv

Mark Dog
 
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