Jeep Commercial

I like it! The editing could use a bit of work, especially the music at the ending felt like it just stopped randomly. But the concept and overall second half of the commercial I really enjoyed.
 
Haha, funny idea and generally good shots. I didn't like these double reflexes of the highbeams, they looked odd.

The alien ship in the beginning should have some humming, electronic sound and the driving jeep should make a sound as well. The editing could be a lot faster, and you would have time to include some kind of master shot where we see the jeep from behind with the couple sitting inside, looking at a great view or something like that (why would they stop the car otherwise).

The Spaceship comes really unexpectedly... it should be introduced by a UFO sound.

EDIT: Oh, now that I watched it one more time, I could hear some kind of sound ... but it more feels like music than a humming UFO sound. by the way, great costumes and great Mars-like territory. Where did you shoot the "alien world" scene?!

PS: Best shot of the commercial is when the jeep approaches the camera and stops (except for the highbeam reflexes)!

Tobias
 
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