Interrogation - (HD Release)

electrofilms

electrofilms

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Runtime: 2:01

Lighting: 2 x 100W Scoops 1 x 500W Omni

Enjoy! Looking for comments and critiques so I can grow as a film maker!

-Justin
 
I think for that style you really need to nail your typography.

Looks like Arial (or very similar) with auto kerning.

Nail that and it will transpose your short so far on.

Fav shot was the slow down as the interrogator leaned into the camera.
 
I agree with the first comment. Typography must be nailed. Also, I found the inability to see the interrogator's face distracting. I realize that was part of your look, but I found myself a little bothered by it. The story was simple and easy to follow. I like snap, crackle, and pop getting killed.
 
i see your goin for the Tony Scott kind of editing. Works fine, i liked it. As the others have said the font doesn't match. The audio is also pretty bad though...sounds like in cam audio.
 
I appreciate you watching! Yes the audio was pretty terrible. Our original plan was to record audio separately in ProTools. The program wouldn't function on set so we were stuck with Lav. mics. Only slightly better than in-camera recording.

Any suggestions on possible fonts that would look "better" for the typography?
 
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