incredibly short movie

i liked the uncut version. haha you guys crack me up bunch of smart asses. :D

since this was just a lil fun lil thing you shoulda used some other music. I wasn't exactly diggin yer bass man.
 
You are definately gonna have to expand on this. Needs more build up at the beginning - more stunts, more running and jumping and flipping. Or at least more of the ant. Some explosions (NOT DURING THE POTTY SCENE). Sound effects and foley (NOT DURING THE POTTY SCENE). Maybe it just needs more cowbell?
 
FXMediaLab said:
You are definately gonna have to expand on this. Needs more build up at the beginning - more stunts, more running and jumping and flipping. Or at least more of the ant. Some explosions (NOT DURING THE POTTY SCENE). Sound effects and foley (NOT DURING THE POTTY SCENE). Maybe it just needs more cowbell?
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I have thought of an alternate ending and an expansion of it, but, I moved out of that houes and although could go back to shoot more stuff, don't really have the motivation to go do it for a stupid short movie.

Maybe in part two, Two Ply, there'll be a lot more of a build up and a more solid(no pun intended) ending.
 
LOL
great punchline. i loved it. "why's he running? where's he going? ohhhhhhhh yeah! i get it! that's happened to me before! i can relate to that! yay!"
 
I know my statements sound really sarcastic but I'm serious. You could really make this into something bigger and more substantial (no pun intended). If done well, this could be a nice entry for some online short contest.
 
mystico said:
I know my statements sound really sarcastic but I'm serious. You could really make this into something bigger and more substantial (no pun intended). If done well, this could be a nice entry for some online short contest.
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I knew you were being sarcastic but I did think that you were partly serious about it. I did have a little interest in adding on to it but after reading your post, I thought the ideas were good and made me want to add on more than before.

I probaly won't add on seeings how I don't feel like driving 45 minutes to do so but I made remake it at my new apartment and make it longer and better. I don't really think it could win a short contest though, but thanks
 
micL said:
I don't really think it could win a short contest though, but thanks
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Go to www.videomaker.com and look at some of their short video contest winners. Type contest into the search bar and look for the listing of winners. If it asks for a keyword to show that you are a subscriber, type in "slate." Many of those winners are goofy concepts. There was one that focused on a woman running across town to return a video that was almost late. It was a one-actor deal like yours. Anyway, just an idea.
 
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