Ice Cold Cola

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LOL The dialogue WAS brilliant, and the look on her face the whole time is priceless, especially at the end
 
Haha great short man. I'm sure the coca-cola corporation would love to see this little ditty. :thumbsup:
 
I was so excited to see it. I love good dialogue. I can't write it, but I love it. Can't wait till its back up.
 
It's not dead, firefox just won't let you access the ftp directly, I had the same problem at first. Use IE for the link.

It's worth it, trust me :)
 
Ok this is scary - I did a similar flic in college in 2002 except it was more of a satirical look on addictions - maybe I should post? Mine involved a guy trying to finish his term paper, finds that he cant keep awake and must replenish his soda supply. Good job tho - I would have had her shoot the machine :)
 
I liked this but felt it too long; the set-up and punch line blend into each other....

I would like to have seen her actually in negotiation with the machine and not the random **** or ****! blurted out.

Im being too long; I also felt the set-ups to limited.

BUt......

Still, well done, nice. I enjoyed it but it wasnt perfect by far.
 
It's too long, you can convey the same message in about one minute and hold more viewer's interest. Her frustration is mounting, we see that, but you don't need to focus on showing us so much of each "stage" just show us that she's getting more and more pissed off.

The reverse shot is good for your establishing shot, but I wouldn't use it again as it kind of looks like security camera footage with a high shot over her back.

Otherwise the colors pop, she seems genuinely pissed, and it's fun!
 
like a few others said, it was a little too long. but I did find it really humorous and a lot of the shots looked really good. All in all, good work!
 
Haha. Did you film the machine until the Ice Cold Cola came on at 12:30 (or whatever time the machine turns on)? The end is pretty funny (in a dark sense). I sometimes feel like doing that. A litte better than what I would expect from a short based completely on getting a coke. Kind of like Phone Booth.
 
I feel with her, I'm up all night working on a project, I just ran out of coke and the coke machine at my school is sold out. Hehe, nothing better than being pissed on a helpless object :)
 
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