I Love you, I'm Sorry.

Wow at least we did good up to that point :P I've been seeing the same issue George, Larry has provided a link please redownload it if you wish :) I posted the link on the previous comment. Thanks for the compliment though makes me feel very enthusiastic after all :P
 
Tried the link, 4 more downloads later stil no complete DL! I will try again later. Did see the ghost climbing across the ceiling BTW, nice!
 
daaaaamn..... I want to see the ending of this one. It keeps freezing on me. Downloaded it again for the 3rd time but still having the same issues.
 
REVIEW:
Some good stuff here. Acting wasn't too bad, I thought the woman did well. I like the lighting stuff you did when the lights went out. Very cool. Thanks for sharing.

FILMMAKER-TO-FILMMAKER:
Not too much to nit-pick about. A nice effort. I look forward to more.
 
Thank you for the awesome comments, I'm a happy camper :) I re-uploaded the film last night so it might be fixed already. Still waiting for a confirmation from Larry. But if you wish check it out again and see the ending I'm quite fond of the ending :)
 
Was not at all able to get into this

I found myself instantly bored, wanting more and getting nothing.

Not for me.
 
I liked your film, in my top ten! Was kinda slow getting started but had a good surprise ending. I wondered what the title meant - now I know!

Technically was a little rough around the edges, ie. lighting, acting, but the story was good. Love triangles are alway good story fodder. So much conflict potential!
 
Every time I download I get the error that my Quicktime (latest version) doesn't think its a quicktime file. Not sure what's going on but would love to see it. Perhaps some codec i'm missing...
 
dmitry,

finally got a good copy of this to watch all the way through. After it ended it kinda dawned on my what the story was about and I had a "damn, that's clever" kind of moment, and it was a very nice tie-in to the title.

Nice subtle lighting work with the flashlight, the whole thing had an organic feel to it. I feel the acting could have been a little stronger, the characters should have played a little better off each other, and watch out with your framing, a couple times in the beginning, the husband's head was getting cut off all the way to the eyes.

Nice work, again, clever!
 
Oo thanks for the review very insightful, will do better next fest around. I realli liked in pieces btw and I have my two cents on the thread. Cool lights, I don't know the issue that you're having. It seemed to be fixed, did you try playing it with media player classic? Thanks abunch.
 
Hey Dmitry Yun,

This was a good story. I thought a lot of the shots were done pretty well.

One thing is that actor's have strong accents and that is distracting for me. I think it would be more engaging if it were in the actor's native tongue with subtitles. I hope I'm not offending anyone because I'm not meaning too. I know it could be a problem if not all the actor's spoke the same language.

I understood what you were trying to do with the audio effects but a lot of them stood out too much and were more distracting then helpful. The heartbeat sound is too cliche though.

I thought the story was very real and had a good natural progression and that's one of the hardest parts. The technical stuff with come easier the more you shoot. Good Job.

Laters,
Ando
 
Thanks Ando, it's not insulting at all about the accents, I was contemplating on shooting this thing in russian but in the end didn't have time to rewrite the script. My actors came from Baltimore and that's a 1:30 hour drive to me, and they're all busy with full time jobs as I am and me and the main actor have kids so it was a bit of a hassle to make this in time :) Plus I only had about 4 hours with them to completely shoot this, figured why bother :) But. I'm going to shoot my next entry in Russian, I'm already brainstorming ideas and getting ready for it. I officialy promies to do a better job with audio, it's hard shuffling around when you're a one man team, but I will take more time next time around to make sure I edit in all the FX nicely and fluidly plus my brother just set up his music and sound studio so we should be more then golden.

BTW loved your entry I was laughing like crazy, your actor was hillarious.
 
Hey Dmitry. I appreciate what you were going for here. I always like it when people find a way in these fests to go for real human drama.

I thought it worked for the most part and your actors had lots of good moments.

Some good creepy moments too like the blood on the wall.

:) :beer:
 
Thank you Jack, I do tend to go for the human drama :) I'm still learning but I think I'm getting better. Thanks for the complements means alot to me.
 
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