Something about it I just didn't really like. I think if you can find 1 great location and tell a story it is better than 20 different ones bouncing all around. Also tell dude to cut his hair, that widows peak he has looks comical. The edit was good and you did a great job maintaining the energy of the song, I just didn't really like the locations that were used.
Find some better angles while shooting, and create different views + perspectives. The project was cool, but it's missing something. A year from now when you have more experience and look back on this you will know what I mean
Not my style of rap music or video due to the content, but aside from that I commend you on your great ability of camera movement, and editing. Aside from this it is really nothing about this production that screams pro level.
The video is super blown out and there is really no depth to this production. I did like how you incorporated some fun dance routines in this production, but there could have been more care taken concerning reflecting light and use of light.