Handguns 2

Hawk Teflon

Hawk Teflon

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After my first handguns video hit 100k on youtube, I really wanted to push it and try for something other than 20 minutes of videoing. So after a day of shooting (in one of the crappiest hotels still in service), I came up with this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Pv4wfne0io

It's the first video I've made where I actually thought about the shots. I'm proud of it, but I know it could be better. Any critiques to help me on my path of bettering?
 
Quite well done. On one of my early shorts, years ago, I had a few scenes like that when we couldn't get enough props. But I never thought of making it a production on its own, which apparently works.
 
Nicely done. What effects package are you using? AE with Action Essentials or is the F/X Home stuff? Or Detonation films? We use Action Essentials.

-Nate
 
I used Action Essentials 2. For the first video (Handguns), I bought Action Essentials but it didn't really work with what I was trying to do, so I ended up using detonation films for that one. They're dirt cheap.
 
Pretty cool effects. I kept trying to story to begin though. It showed almost like just an action real or a video game (if you skipped through all the story parts).

Id like to see you write a story of sorts around this, add some dialogue and a curve in teh story, could be much more interesting.

You obviously have some talents doing cgi and stuff, maybe write a full story, ad some actual gun props and go to town.
 
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