"Hampton" - A short film about my Hometown

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Phil_UK

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This is a short film about my hometown "Hampton", situated in the south west of greater London.

Enjoy and please give me some feedback!


Phil
 
The setup I used:

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And this was good to get more stable shots. Resting the forehead against the monitor!

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Hi Phil - quite 'sweet' and almost bucolic. For me it would be improved immensely by the inclusion of more people. The place looks deserted. 'Towns' are about people - thats the whole reason for their existence, and I think I'd like to see more direct and obvious references to the presence of the town's inhabitants. There's a couple of people evident in a few frames, but they are almost unnoticeable. More people!
 
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