Grabs from Dell F.O.R. Entry

I'll probably be uploading the 12 minute cut of the movie (the 5 minute cut for the contest was terrible). But for now, thought you'd like to check out these grabs. Tell me what you guys think.

(shot in about 2 days, DVX100b, LEX w/ 35mm 1.2, CC'd in premiere with basic colour corrector)

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i just realized there is a bunch of stills i never exported, ill post them later.

tell me what you think of these (btw, lucky me caught the gg on screen and cropped it out before submitting, though this was after i exported these stills)
 
Yes i do have footage to show, ill be showing everything actually. im all excited about my vimeo account, so the 12 minute cut will be the first thing i upload. newho, here are the rest...

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cc'd version.. makes a little diff.

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welp, thanks for the feedback, would love to hear what you have to say about these too.


almost forgot, im glad someone noticed the overexposure working well with these, i tried making it seem
like there was nothing outside his work enviroment that existed.
 
ill probably be posting the full video in the next few days, i just need to make final tweaks before i submit it to this local film fest. no comments on the second set?
 
The overexposure actually works for these.

Pretty cool looking.

Hmmm... I'm gonna have to disagree. Seems like *most* of them are either too underexposed, or way to hot.

Composition looks pretty good, but you're ALL over the place with exposure. I'd suggest taking some time to learn your zebras.
 
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