Got 21 minutes to check out my film???

Tear into it? umm ok...warning I am bored at work
Here goes....
The opening guitar scene... Too orange for ths kin, the next shot in the car has a nice peach skin tone, and to jump from the orange is distracting.
The car scene has a exposure jump at 1:30
When he pulls up to the copy place the sky is too light compaired to the exposure of the actor and building, would rather see bighter actor/building than a darker sky.
Get some ND to put on the windows so you dont have to suffer from blowen out bg for situations like when he enters/leaves.
In the bar slider move, there is a bit of shake, probably get rid of it if you ran it thought a stabilizer plug in.
Also in the bar, the bg music track seams to be the same level as the bar chatter making my ears think they are the same and getting them confused. And after watching the whole scene, there is no visual justification for all that chatter, can't see anyone in the bar.
ND on the window for the cross shot
3:10 there is an audio ghost of the girl talking, maybe a channel slipped a few frames?
3:36 more ghost audio
The dinner looks overexposed a tad for the skin.
Pan at 5:11 has a lot of jello, have you seen rollingshutter from The Foundry, looks promising.
When he leaves dinner, maybe could of had a light in the hallway on the door instead of a black void he walks into.
Room for sky replacement when he wakes up in the truck
Side note, "Last chance in or out?" reminds me of back to the future 2 lol
Orange and shaky when he goes into the dead friend's house.
The projector screen gets some crazy noise on it when he turns off the light, you coudl mask it out
The difference in the camera height for the split screen is a bit distracting for the shot at 12:42
Eco and hiss for the pre funeral church scene.

Looks good, liked the story, maybe a little less hand held in the future if you keep using the SLR, it's sensor just can't handel it.
 
with time and budget constraints and with little to no equipment outside of what i own or was willing to buy- i am mostly okay with all those rips... the color issues really frustrated me. we had massive color problems getting it back from color to FCP so we just didn't worry about it cause it was due and to be honest, i hate this movie now and just want to move on... lol
 
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