Chris_Keaton
ScriptFEST Mod
This is an interesting religious type tale. I think the horrifying moments went by too fast. And the build up was pretty slow for a short. It was all the way to page 5 and the midpoint that he is introduced to the thought of selling his soul. The dialog and writing in general were fantastic as usual. I see a few points where the characters say 'you' when they meant 'you're'. But that's about it. Good job.
