chris f
Veteran
Just watched this today and loved it. Hilarious. Very well written, I laughed at alot of parts, but just seeing the whole watermelon sitting in the picnic basket before he even mentioned it made me crack up. A little more production quality (song sync, outdoor lighting continuity, foley) would put it more in the "great little short film" category instead of border-lining in the "funny youtube clip" category. Anyways great stuff!
