"Forever" Music Video- Jamaica Reggae love Song

Thanks for the feedback Will. Glad it achieved that look cuz it wasn't high budget at all:) we got all those things through connections and some good scouting.
 
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I think you could have told the story different instead of including so many of the same type of scenes. IMO the opening scene in the water does not blend with the scene at the piano and the scene of the bedroom, way to much visuals showing the same thing. Now they all look great visually, but this is from a directors point of view.


You should have held the bedroom scene longer and maybe introduce some kind of daydream sequence showing all of the great moments they have shared. How it is now it's presented in present state and it just looks really weird.

The locations look, awesome and the quality is top notch.... Really like it. One thing I noticed though is it appears you have some kind of face light tracking on the woman on the woman's face and that also looks really strange and is very noticeable .

Overall I would have liked to seen less performance and more story telling 7.5/10
 
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