Flying -Intro- Really need feedback

[Maxim]

Hey guys/girls

I am currently working on a short film for a my A2 assigment and maybe entering it into film festivals if it turns out alright. We couldn't make the location since it was all locked up so we decided to bang a test intro out in another. I am really looking for feedback on the following aspects

Directing/Cinemotograhpy
Make Up
Sound Design

All done by me :lol:

Anyway guys heres the intro, I don't want to reveal to much about the film as off so I am not going to divulge into what its all about

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I AGREE

 

[ikander]

Drug/addiction movies are tough because its a genre that's been done a bunch.

Visually it looked fine. Pacing was a bit slow for my tastes...we've seen this sort of thing before (guy doing drugs). That sequence could have been cut down to 30 seconds tops. Two minutes feels really long to just show a guy shooting up heroin.

Sound Design was a bit overdone, in my opinion. But, I'd be curious to see other people's thoughts.