Jonny Walks
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This is part of a series I'm making called "Flatmates", just a collection of short comedy pieces so I can learn. If you think something could be done better or you like something let me know, I'd appreciate the feedback!
Jon
Flatmates - Friendships - Short Comedy
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This is part of a series I'm making called "Flatmates", just a collection of short comedy pieces so I can learn. If you think something could be done better or you like something let me know, I'd appreciate the feedback!
Jon
I enjoyed that. wish all the shots weren't so close up. Its a comedy ...I dont wanna be all up in their grille. Get some medium / medium long shots in there But the acting was good. the soundtrack is also nice. Look forward to seeing another.Jonny Walks
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Thanks for the comments Jambredz 
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Yes I agree! I think the shots are a little too close, so it feels a little too personal for a comedy. This was one of the experiements I wanted to do on this one (there are a few others online a little wider). I wanted to see how it would work, but it didn't work for either of us! Thanks for the confirmation now I know not to do it this way next time.)
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) Yes I agree! I think the shots are a little too close, so it feels a little too personal for a comedy. This was one of the experiements I wanted to do on this one (there are a few others online a little wider). I wanted to see how it would work, but it didn't work for either of us! Thanks for the confirmation now I know not to do it this way next time.
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