First Narrative Short

digitalfilmmaker

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Shot using the 10-22 and 18-135 lenses with a couple of lowell lights in 6 hours.

Sound on the h4n.

Shot flat and graded with MB quicklooks.
 
Very interesting take on the subject matter. I thought it was funny and original. Some of the inuendo started getting a little heavy after a while but not to the point where it was blatantly offensive.

Nice little touches like the water, etc...

Your color grading is a little on the green side, but i realize that may be for creative purposes.

Keep it coming.
 
Your color grading is a little on the green side, but i realize that may be for creative purposes.

Thanks!

Yeah I wanted the grading to be a little extreme for obvious reasons. Plus we didn't have much chance to art direct the piece so I did it more in post.

:)
 
I didn't have a problem so much with the grading as the vignette, which distracted the hell out of me, it's the only thing I didn't like, but damn it's distracting.
 
QuickLooks/presets are meant to be tweaked. If you leave them how they look you're usually missing out on a lot
 
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