First Music Video

well, she obviously has some skills and you definately have skills as a filmmaker. There were just a few things about this that I'd suggest either altering, or trying better next time (since you said you're on a time limit).

Her moves are good, but not quite dynamic enough. It seems like it was done on a pretty chilly day, hence the warm clothes. But those clothes seem to hold her back a little. The shape of the body really accents the moves in most dances. But she could still break it down and had her own unique style.

and like you said, you're going to do some CC work. But I'd say don't overdo it, because a lot of your shots already look pretty good. Just spruce up a bit, ya know? Or go for something totally different.

anyway, nice job. I liked it.
 
adam powell said:
im scared of that woman.
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I must agree with you there Adam. The whole concept is pretty cool but I do have a few suggestions.

There were some unnecessary inserts of her leg motions that you could do without. Maybe replace with close-ups if you have any.

Also, your subject seemed to move slow for me. I don't know if its a timing thing on her end, but she moved a little slower than the music did. Kinda threw me off. Was that the music she was dancing to while you were shooting? If not, I would suggest a less upbeat song.

Hope this gives you a different prespective on the project. Good luck!:thumbup:
 
hmmm I may have to make a video of me bustin. wanna battle? lol jk. but no really I think I'm going to make 1.
 
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