First Music Video - "Cold War Kids" $0 Budget, 0 Crew, 4 Hours

I liked it. Got a liiittle tedious, but the song was awesome, so that kept my interest.

One point though... go back and add some CONTRAST to the entire thing. Your blacks should be as black as the bars on top and bottom. It's just all grey, and really, really needs more contrast.

good work.

-brown
 
i kinda like it, just some notes i did:

pros:
- good opening with that train thingy

cons:
- flowers coloring effect is not ended nicely (editing)
- ice cream doesnt deserve its own shot, kills the cool mood imho (editing)
- seems like only one location after the train, gets boring (concept)
- there is 0 development of the 'story', seems like the only thing that was figured out wat the train shot at the end (concept)

tnx for posting it.

edit: more pros:
- unlike rcbrown23 i do like the null contrast, washed out look.
 
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i liked the whole thing , only thing i didnt like was the zoom you made when hes waiting and the traffics going by it is contrast from the wide and miedum shot with cuts you made , and i might darken it a little little more contrast, but i liked it it was that regular here the band / group and music type video

peace n luv

Mark Dog
 
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