first music vid

Definitely some good moments there - you could try building more tension with the couple. Ultimately though, you've already masted the first rule of videomaking: cast a fit girl in a tiny bikini.
 
longcipher said:
Definitely some good moments there - you could try building more tension with the couple. Ultimately though, you've already masted the first rule of videomaking: cast a fit girl in a tiny bikini.
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The shots look good, you've got a nice variety and a lot of interesting things going on. A lot of the shots seem a bit shakey though, I'm guessing it was handheld with just the camera. Try adding some weight, a rig or simply attatching a tripod and hold the tripod to help smooth out the jitters. Cool video though, keep it up!
 
Thanks for giving me some feedback! Yeah, I need to stabilize my shots better, and we are shooting a couple more scenes to build tension as longcipher suggests. Also adding more of the band singing the song. The vocals guy said, "you know what the vid needs? More of me." So, maybe I can cut some of the more jittery shots out and add the needed content.
Again, thank you guys for helping a newbie out!

Edit - Also wanted to add, the last shot is obviously a goproh2. Although, I know everyone prob figured that out.
 
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