Fight Under Bridge

I would have liked a bit more 'foot/fist in your lens' action, and some of the medium/wide shots were a bit too long to maintain the fight sequence pacing... but about the only thing I really would have liked to have seen is at the end when the Zara is waling away, to have her go 'boo' to the passer by... (you could see some people in the back ground of other shots, and they really didn't lend to the 'realness' of the fight... ok... maybe in London people just stand around watching fights go down...)

But other wise the "Guy Richie" style of freeze frame, and 'inkdrawing/cartooning' was good.
 
I loved it! Very well cut.. Not to mention a the girl being easy on the eyes..Just not the throat...... Bad *ss..
 
This was awesome; well done.

But learn the line rule; action is hard enough to follow much less with the camera jumping all over the place.
 
I thought it was great! in london they do watch a fight!

I loved the pigeon and its fluttering wings, I like how your actors dominated the screen with great choreography and perfect moves without cheating with closeups of hand play between fight sequence setups

My only suggestions is I would like to have seen more variance on the sound effects on blows and crunches both in type on different body parts (neck vs arm) and its level based on its proximity to the viewer/camera.
 
Thanks! We usually shoot with 2 cameras so I didn't get as much coverage now. This time I shot by myself and I did some amateurish mistakes with the lines when I forgot I had no second camera. It's even more frustrating as I usually never do those 180 degree jumping cuts. There were edits where I got over them but they didn't flow as well so I had to use some of those jumps. The pigeon was something we tried to get even more epic (walking past the pigeon, it flies up). Didn't work as it didn't like my direction. :shocked:
 
I really like the choreography and she is really a good action figure I would say...there are some scene-cutting that didn't match but overall still an entertaining watch.

Found it a bit funny when the bystanders simply pass by and not amazed with any of your stuff...hahahaa
 
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