Would love to get everyone's opinion on the video I created this week. First foray into fashion shorts/ads. Some tech details on the Vimeo page. Thanks in advance!
http://vimeo.com/32345582
http://vimeo.com/32345582
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Fashion short
- Thread starter bming1
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Would love to get everyone's opinion on the video I created this week. First foray into fashion shorts/ads. Some tech details on the Vimeo page. Thanks in advance!
http://vimeo.com/32345582
Great work. Is that the hacked GH2?
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Would love to get everyone's opinion on the video I created this week. First foray into fashion shorts/ads. Some tech details on the Vimeo page. Thanks in advance!
http://vimeo.com/32345582
For some number of shots, there was quite a bit of air space above the girl's head. Perhaps you were avoiding a 'bustline' shot... but since she has one... unlike 'super models', I think you should show more.
Also, I think there were too few 'detail' shots of the sweater, the neckerchief, if those are the 'Armani' items. The pants didn't look like much. Also, watch the 'wrinkles' the sweater looked a bit bunched baggy around
the model's hips and shoulders. It's almost like this sweater is a size too large for her.
The final shot of her turning was a bit clipped. Use a freeze frame to extend the last shot and have the company logo come up. I'd also use a 'under bust, to top of head shot' on that as well.
No, it's the stock GH2. I'd love to try out one of the patches, but don't have the time to experiment with them. Do you know which is the most stable hack that provides spanning and a noticeable improvement in quality? Would appreciate any direction you can provide. Thanks!Great work. Is that the hacked GH2?
For some number of shots, there was quite a bit of air space above the girl's head. Perhaps you were avoiding a 'bustline' shot... but since she has one... unlike 'super models', I think you should show more.
Also, I think there were too few 'detail' shots of the sweater, the neckerchief, if those are the 'Armani' items. The pants didn't look like much. Also, watch the 'wrinkles' the sweater looked a bit bunched baggy around
the model's hips and shoulders. It's almost like this sweater is a size too large for her.
The final shot of her turning was a bit clipped. Use a freeze frame to extend the last shot and have the company logo come up. I'd also use a 'under bust, to top of head shot' on that as well.
Yeah, this was shot on an extreme budget, so no wardrobe stylist, MUA, etc. Thanks for the suggestions about detail shots, though. THat is definitely something that's lacking and I'll remedy that in future.