Experimental Music Video (Moby)

i thought it was perfect, it was sort of like with each pan was an hour later in time, it seems to me that if you added in more and more tiny events like Young-H._Lee is suggesting, it would get boring. sometimes its not good to give away every piece of the plot all at once, the was he did it, i found that you had to sort of look for things that told you what was going on, which made it interesting. it was like you were looking through a little window into someones life and not just reading a story about it. i also think the fact that she stayed in the one room was kind of cute actually. its like her whole life is just put in this tiny little room, so everything in it is basically, her life. its like her life is the room. sort of. anyway i thought it was good. peace.
 
Young-H. Lee - Thanks for the ideas. You know I respect your work and talent, A LOT! Not sure how much more effort I want to put into this particular footage. I feel like I'm beating a dead horse. I don't even have access to the actress any more. The park footage is actually a different girl. D'oh!

rene rene - Thank you very much. That's what I was hoping for. Isolating the woman and her emotions into this one room as we watch. Capturing bits and pieces of everyday life, along with pieces of a romance and break-up. I originally didn't have any of the park footage. The lights go out and the camera keeps turning (you can see the original, Full Circle, and others on my website - link below). Thank you very much for your review.
 
Thanks jpbankesmercer and kylelewis1.

Going to reshoot the park scene so there's better lighting. Will post new version later.

Thanks again everyone.
-pk
 
If anyone cares the video has been updated with a new scene. Not as dark. You can take a look if you want by using the orignal links in the first post.

Thanks for all your advice and support.
-pk
 
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