djbobbyrhodes
Well-known member
Not that you asked for it, but here is my critique of your trailer.
As a member of the "uneducated masses" who has never read the short story, the trailer definitely has piqued my interest.
However, I'm still a little short on exactly what the movie is about. Who is skipper and why does he need to be eliminated? I'm sure that gets answered, and maybe there's a reason that it's a secret, but I wouldn't have minded to just see what he looks like for a moment in the trailer. I like the sci-fi-ish-ness with the pre-cog, post-cog part. But, I'm still lost as to whether this is going to be a drama, or action, or whatever.
Imagine I saw this trailer and I decided I wanted to go see it at my local movie theater. So, I call up a friend and tell him I want to go see "Everything's Eventual". He asks, "What's it about?". I reply with, "Some guy gets a job at some spooky corporation that deals with telepathic, mental, sci-fi stuff." And then I don't know anything else.
My only critiques for your trailer. Just so you can have a totally unbiased opinion.
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Okay. Now that the critique is over, I can shower you with praise. Everything I have seen thus far looks awesome. The screen grabs look great, and I would definitely be down to check out a fellow DVX'er's film. I hope that I'll get to see this eventually what with the usual unavailablity of dollar baby films.
Best of luck to you, and I hope that SK gets a look at this and will be impressed.
As a member of the "uneducated masses" who has never read the short story, the trailer definitely has piqued my interest.
However, I'm still a little short on exactly what the movie is about. Who is skipper and why does he need to be eliminated? I'm sure that gets answered, and maybe there's a reason that it's a secret, but I wouldn't have minded to just see what he looks like for a moment in the trailer. I like the sci-fi-ish-ness with the pre-cog, post-cog part. But, I'm still lost as to whether this is going to be a drama, or action, or whatever.
Imagine I saw this trailer and I decided I wanted to go see it at my local movie theater. So, I call up a friend and tell him I want to go see "Everything's Eventual". He asks, "What's it about?". I reply with, "Some guy gets a job at some spooky corporation that deals with telepathic, mental, sci-fi stuff." And then I don't know anything else.
My only critiques for your trailer. Just so you can have a totally unbiased opinion.
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Okay. Now that the critique is over, I can shower you with praise. Everything I have seen thus far looks awesome. The screen grabs look great, and I would definitely be down to check out a fellow DVX'er's film. I hope that I'll get to see this eventually what with the usual unavailablity of dollar baby films.
Best of luck to you, and I hope that SK gets a look at this and will be impressed.
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