Episode 2 of Webseries - "Ike Vs. Vin"

TheDynamoDuo

TheDynamoDuo

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Hey guys, been a while trying to get this project done, but we finally got part 1 uploaded to YouTube.


Just wanted to get your guys' take on it and what you think? We always value the opinion of everyone here. So, please, shoot us some feedback!

Thanks guys!
 
REALLY long opening. It's 51 seconds in before we get to the actual content. Especially for a web series this seems way too long. I'm actually in pre-production on a web series now and our intent is a prologue followed by some very quick (like 10 or 15 seconds total) credits.

It had some moments. not badly written.

The handheld got on my nerves, but that's a taste thing.
 
The pacing was waay too slow. Too much time spent just seeing them run across the screen, and a lot of the shots linger for way too long. It could easily have been about 3/4 as long, if not shorter.
 
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