Shawn Philip Nelson
Veteran
Amy! I realized I hadn't commented yet, shame on me!
I enjoyed this piece, definitely a good progression on your part on the craft of filmmaking. One thing I was disappointed on was no payoff for the El Cucuy. Even if you didnt get a fx artist, we at least deserved a Hitchcock'esque shadow or something. As it stands "Magic Girl-Eating Closet" is a more appropriate title then that of a monster that's not actually in here at all.
Very good acting by the girl! I wish you'd given her more to do, the pacing felt very slow, I'd have loved to see her do more than variations on fidgeting and delay.
Looking forward to your next one!
I enjoyed this piece, definitely a good progression on your part on the craft of filmmaking. One thing I was disappointed on was no payoff for the El Cucuy. Even if you didnt get a fx artist, we at least deserved a Hitchcock'esque shadow or something. As it stands "Magic Girl-Eating Closet" is a more appropriate title then that of a monster that's not actually in here at all.
Very good acting by the girl! I wish you'd given her more to do, the pacing felt very slow, I'd have loved to see her do more than variations on fidgeting and delay.
Looking forward to your next one!