dvx100b Action Film Trailer

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onlyck

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Hey,

I have been sitting on this trailer for about a year but have finally gotten the courage to post it here. I made this when I was 17 so please keep that in mind. We shot this to be only a trailer and filmed in about two days. There are some obvious flaws (no audio equipment, too much light in some shots, etc) but I'de love to get some other feedback on the project. Thank you so much.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12q9Cl7JRsc


- Cyrus
 
Personally, I thought it was great!

Yes, yes, the technial stuff, plus shaky acting - true, amateur hour, but hey, you didn't have the $ and you were only 17, you are forgiven :)

Couple nitpicks - I hated that the guy walks in holding the pistol sideways - that's way, way, way overplayed. I hated the music in the second half - lame and been done a milion trillion times.

Overall, still loved it :)
 
Hey, cool stuff man. You're doing it - going out there and actually shooting something instead of complaining about needing proper gear etc. before you shoot. Good stuff man. Your stuff will only get better, awesome.

I have to agree on the music in the second half though...I'd get rid of it and use something smaller but cooler. All it does is epic-ify (?) your trailer with a big orchestral cue that's been used in a million trailers already.

-Chris
 
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