DVX Action Fight Sequence

that was great. but a little weak on the sequences I thought. it can use tighter shots to allow for a faster paced feel, like in Bourne Identity.
A better location would've made it all that much better. but hey, I understand.
nice work!
 
Yeah still doesn't work for me, .mov file just doesn't read right, and the .mp4 file automatically turns into an mp4.txt for some reason. And usually I can figure these things out.
 
Nice work! I felt the lighting could have been a bit better. Some of the scenes looked too flat. The lighting from the overhead shot looked great though!
 
delete the .txt and it'll ask if you want to keep it as txt or mp4. do mp4 and you guys should be able to watch it then.
 
Very impressive... Just think of how much better it would have came out if the talent did not have to focus so much on the choreography because of time contraints. Good job.

SmithHouse
 
dvpixl said:
that was great. but a little weak on the sequences I thought. it can use tighter shots to allow for a faster paced feel, like in Bourne Identity.
A better location would've made it all that much better. but hey, I understand.
nice work!
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I think if she shots were any tighter I couldn't even tell what it was. It was hard enough trying to figure out what was going on with the tightness of the shots and the speed of the edits anyway, and the Bourne Identity is definitely not the best model you'd want to use to improve your fight scenes. Ease the camera back a bit, move it around more, make the sequences longer and show more of the talent that your crew has. Don't be afraid to really sell the hits and by all means don't try to compensate in editing. I mean I liked it and could tell you guys have some good skills, but you should rely more on your own speed and perfect your timing and physical acting instead of working with closer shots and camera tricks.
 
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