Deuceofspades
Veteran
Comments on Vimeo clips:
In many ways: AMAZING!!!!!!! Angles, always motivated moves, acting (mostly) BUT
In my humble opinion, the edits are about 40% too slow. Try a faster cut, and look at it again in a few weeks, or show it to people unfamiliar with the project and see what they think. Take out all "blank areas" where the dialogue and emotion do not progress. Also, some shots call attention to themselves a wee bit too much. Eye Candy is great, but I do feel that sometimes we need plane Jane shooting to focus on the acting and story. Best is a combo of the two, with rythmic flow.
I say this in the context of being inspired by your hard work and dedicationa and belief in your dreams, along with you obvious talent. PM me if you need advice/help on anything (albeit I live in Montreal, Quebec)
Well that's precisely what i am doing right now. trimmng all eth shots and keeping the story moving. the vimeo clips are pretty old now. Both the jalopy race and the 1942 flashbacks have been trimmed down a lot, and improved quite a bit. But I am hesitant to replace the clips that are online because that will cause me to lose all the hit count.
So in short, I am agreeing with you to a good extent and already hd figure out that much and have been working on it for 3 weeks now. Learning how much to trim out and experimenting with pace.
Once I am done with cutting the fat, the trimmed down movie is going to be shown to 3 key people, two of which have a pretty impressive collection of Academy Awards. Its going to be nerve wrecking but I am sure it will be very beneficial. the goal is to get their opinion as to whether the film is now ready or whether it needs more TLC and where to take it from here...
OK well, going to sleep now, tomorrow and sunday I intend to edit all day / part of the night.