Defenseless by Marnie Mitchell-Lister

MML

MML

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CHANGED TO: "Animal Control" ---- STARTED A NEW THREAD - An independent young woman mistakenly puts herself in danger when she accepts help from her creepy apartment manager in an effort to trap a wounded cat.


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Just added the logline. Might have to make a new poster...don't like this one. But I figured if I posted one and got the thread started I'd have to finish the screenplay! :)
 
I'm trying to get to 50%. I was eyeballing it by pages. Figured 6 pages I wanted at least 3 trapped the rest for set up. Trimming it back like crazy now hoping it doesn't leave holes. Been happening to me a lot lately. What's in my head not coming out right page wise when written. I'm getting pretty old though. That could be it. ;)

Yeah....I guess the voters will decide whether the story has enough 'trappededness'. :happy:
 
Man...I seriously may have to bail. My story is really coming out sucky. Unless maybe I come up with a new idea in the next few days.
 
Changed to animal control

Changed to animal control

Changed to ANIMAL CONTROL....started a new thread under that title. :2vrolijk_08:
 
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