I interpreted it as an accident. I think a suicide would be almost too much, make it seem more like melodrama. With an accident, too, it would increase the unwillingness to go and find someone else, I think. An accident can happen to *anyone*--except, of course, for simulated computer girls.
"Dead Inside" - prezorg
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Jeremy Ordan
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Just watched this one and I was really impressed.
Good:
I liked the acting, thought it was very strong. I liked the lighting for your white room, good job, only one part where the shadows destroy the illusion. I liked the story, maybe one of the best I have seen so far.
Could be Improved:
Sound: It just didn't sound clean to me, especially the ADR. Also the effect mix just wasn't EQ'd, so when he plugs the cable in that is louder than the dialogue. Also, the handheld was too much for me. It crossed a line and became distracting from the story rather than bringing more urgency.
Overall:
One of my favorites so far because of the story. There is something emotional, true, and passionate that ressonates from this film. I look forward to seeing your future contributions.
Jeremy
Good:
I liked the acting, thought it was very strong. I liked the lighting for your white room, good job, only one part where the shadows destroy the illusion. I liked the story, maybe one of the best I have seen so far.
Could be Improved:
Sound: It just didn't sound clean to me, especially the ADR. Also the effect mix just wasn't EQ'd, so when he plugs the cable in that is louder than the dialogue. Also, the handheld was too much for me. It crossed a line and became distracting from the story rather than bringing more urgency.
Overall:
One of my favorites so far because of the story. There is something emotional, true, and passionate that ressonates from this film. I look forward to seeing your future contributions.
Jeremy