D90 Work - Application Film Schools

[Sanbu]

Hey guys,

My first post here! Woo!

Here are my first two clips in a series that I might be sending to two film schools in the Netherlands. The deadline is in March, so I'll be making a lot more until then.
Please tell me what you think! All feedback is welcome!






Thanks!

 

[jonE5]

What are the applications supposed to be? Looked more like a photographers portfolio. A lot of beautiful shots, not much motion (aside from the car moving, (great shot btw)).

Seems like a lot of the things i see here, great eye, great composition, zero story. I felt myself getting pretty bored in the first one about halfway through.

Anything where you have a script, and a story written?

jon

 

[Sanbu]

Ah yea, portfolio discribes it better. I'll be applying to the academies, but 'application' is indeed the wrong word for it. I'll need to send in a maximum of 15 minutes of footage.

And you're right about the lack of storytelling. Looking back on it, I think I could've done much more with 'Vanity'. It's a just sort of a quick sequence of images. I'm working on a script as we speak with some friends of mine. Thanks for the feedback