Critique this Music Video

[kenwilx1016]

I recently shot a music video and I'm looking for some constructive criticism on all the aspects that have to do with cinematography; camera work, lighting, color, etc.

The music is pretty hard core so be warned. Thank you for your time, I really just want to hear others opinions. I want to be careful not to have new baby syndrome where I think my kid is gorgeous even though its ugly as hell. haha

Thanks for your time.

Video is here: http://web.me.com/kenwilx/Wilcox_Cinema/Music_Videos.html

 

[mrkarma83]

Not sure which of the two you wanted criticism on. I thought they were both well lit and well shot, although there was a little "breathing" with your focus during "Cut Down". Overall good work and much better than my first music video. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uEZ0jFpe0BM