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Any comments on how anything could've been better? Thanks
PaPa
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James,
very cool man. Really dug the video. I like the story line and the voice over, the editing had a great pace as well. The video was a tad on the long side for my attention span. Also, until a few minutes in, i thought this was a type of documentary. I think your piece could greatly benefit from a little color grading to take the edge off of the realism of the image, unless that is what you are going for.
Good work!
very cool man. Really dug the video. I like the story line and the voice over, the editing had a great pace as well. The video was a tad on the long side for my attention span. Also, until a few minutes in, i thought this was a type of documentary. I think your piece could greatly benefit from a little color grading to take the edge off of the realism of the image, unless that is what you are going for.
Good work!
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Thanks Papa! That's some of the most insightful feedback I've read in a while.
Yeah, originally I had intended to do color correction, but deadline came along, an that was that. I may do cc before it airs, especially since you mentioned that. The youtube version looks a bit whacked, I'll have to upload to vimeo at some point.
There was a bit of wanting a docu feeling to give a hypothetical reality feel, hence the shoulder mount shots, and largely natural light.
Yeah, originally I had intended to do color correction, but deadline came along, an that was that. I may do cc before it airs, especially since you mentioned that. The youtube version looks a bit whacked, I'll have to upload to vimeo at some point.
There was a bit of wanting a docu feeling to give a hypothetical reality feel, hence the shoulder mount shots, and largely natural light.