Chupacabra: The Short

[Ogranado]

Hey DVXUsers!

This is my first time posting on DVXuser. I've been a lurker for some time! I want some critique from my fellow DVXUsers for my short film, Chupacabra. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_GU5kRc50Qk which was shot with my XH-A1

It was shot with a $15 dollar budget and was done for a school production class. I was lucky enough to have outstanding help from some DVXUser members. I had Jason Smith do some great cinematography. I had the awesome SGPro provided with J. Nguyen and some outstanding help from Newport Pictures.

I am open to suggestions and to any constructive criticism. Don't feel bad about tearing it apart because I am still learning this craft.

Hope to hear from you guys!

Best,

Ogranado

 

[freg]

I'm not convinced with the title font, it doesn't have a "professional" look
I liked the photography, great editing.
why isn't there an option with: "Has its details, but overall a good work" I would've voted for that

 

[yommytacoe]

I liked the short a lot. IMO The thing that seemed to be lacking was the foley work. It really sounded (and looked) like you did all the audio dubbing in post. How you actually did the audio, I don't know but I wish I could have heard the crunching of the leaves and sticks with the footsteps. or maybe some heavy breathing while they ran up and down the hills, ect. Just something to think about.

 

[Finnegan]

A good start Omar!