Cerebral Static: Trailer..........

[merc]

i dont see wat the problem is. what are you talking about?

 

[Zak Forsman]

you may want to bring some of the cards into "title safe". a few are right on the edge of the frame. that's my only piece of advice....


...For YOU!!!

 

[Steven Bogda]

i think a different font would look better as well. try the free ones at abstractfonts.com

i live in philly/new jersey too!

 

[Michael Anthony Horrigan]

Lots of shots of people looking into the camera. Probably too many actually.

A bit better than the last time you posted it though.

 

[alex whitmer]

Great trailer!

Music, scenes, lighting all remained in the same voice. You give just enough information for the viewer to beg for more.

Good job.

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www.alexwhitmer.wordpress.com

 

[Andrew Brinkhaus]

Thought it looked moderately amateur, with regard to the lighting and composition. Next time around pay more attention to your exposure, and do what you can to maintain your highlights, and light so you don't have blown out BG's. It is a dead giveaway that your shooting digital, and makes it look less professional.

Remember I am speaking only from a DP's perspective, but visuals are equally as important for today's audiences. Best of luck with the project!