I recently completed a short film about the owners of a small coffee shop in Los Angeles. Would love for you all to give it a look and let me know what you think. Thanks!
I loved it. Really well done. I especially liked the pacing, and the editing. You also managed to make it very intimate and well-balanced as far as the mood. Everything worked - the music, the cutting rhythms, the imagery. Well done. It doesn't really have any "faults" for me - if I were to find something demanding to say, it would be that perhaps it could have done with some little thing at the end, to take it to a higher place - it could be anything, a word, a facial expression, a picture, a camera move... something that last bit of "extra" zing. Still overall, an excellent 3 minute short - I loved the length of it... just right! Congratulations.
