MUSIC VIDEO: Brick City Love Song

turtlesinautumn

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Well, I'm back. I'll try to be less annoying this time around. I slacked off posting in User Films for a bit, but I feel this is worth it. It's a music video I just made to "Brick City Love Song" by Riding Alone For Thousands Of Miles. The best instrumental song I have heard in a long time.
This video is made up pretty much entirely of shots of lights and rainfall at night, shot over a period of a few days. Please, constructive criticism is welcomed. "This sucks rotting cow corpse" is not.

 
I'd say you had a few compelling shots in here and the music is nice, but I have to be honest and admit that after 3 minutes I skimmed through the rest. Several of the shots would have been better served on a tripod as well. It would have been nice to see this going somewhere instead of just shots of different places in the rain. If there was any kind of story with this it would have been much better. Keep at it. I think you're developing a filmmaker's eye.
 
I'd say you had a few compelling shots in here and the music is nice, but I have to be honest and admit that after 3 minutes I skimmed through the rest. Several of the shots would have been better served on a tripod as well. It would have been nice to see this going somewhere instead of just shots of different places in the rain. If there was any kind of story with this it would have been much better. Keep at it. I think you're developing a filmmaker's eye.

Thank you! I agree, a tripod would have been nice, but I just shot this in a car on-the-fly. I'll work on the next one having some kind of story... :)
 
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