SHORT: Brat on a Bike

Lol!! That was pretty hilarious. I can't believe you guys are just 14. That's great! Keep going and don't ever stop. Things to fix or improve - I would say fix the audio when the kid rides the bike on to the grass the first time. The audio changes abruptly and didn't sound right. You could do an audio fade or cross dissolve there to help. Also, if you add a better and stronger sound effect for the disappearance, it'll have a better effect. Great job though.
 
the sound is good actualy... Is it boomed, or just a mic on the camera ?

Very good acting also...or are they just like this ? :-p

Some good shots also, like with the weel turning... The only shot I daught is that one around 1:30, it's like he doesn't has a corp.

And around 1:39 "your so kiddy beh beh beh", he starts to laugh, it's easy to cut the laugh and replace it with some bike sound which you have from other shots.
Or you can easely cut in the video too...
 
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Marlon Ladd said:
Lol!! That was pretty hilarious. I can't believe you guys are just 14. That's great! Keep going and don't ever stop. Things to fix or improve - I would say fix the audio when the kid rides the bike on to the grass the first time. The audio changes abruptly and didn't sound right. You could do an audio fade or cross dissolve there to help. Also, if you add a better and stronger sound effect for the disappearance, it'll have a better effect. Great job though.
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Thanks! I didn't notice that in post, and I don't know how i didn't. I would have totally cross faded it if I knew! :) Thanks for watching!

dre83 said:
the sound is good actualy... Is it boomed, or just a mic on the camera ?

Very good acting also...or are they just like this ? :-p

Some good shots also, like with the weel turning... The only shot I daught is that one around 1:30, it's like he doesn't has a corp.

And around 1:39 "your so kiddy beh beh beh", he starts to laugh, it's easy to cut the laugh and replace it with some bike sound which you have from other shots.
Or you can easely cut in the video too...
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HAHA! No, were not like this! :D
This was not boomed, we used a shot gun mic and moved it depending on where the talent was at the time. That shot you were talking about I think was a mistake on our apart, I think we were going for a side angle and we got more of a half side half front which looked strange.
Yes, I knew someone would catch the laughing part, for me in editing, I personally thought it was funny, and after he laughed it switches to a shot of him smiling so, I thought it would fit!

Thanks for the support and help guys! :D
 
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