Assisting Todd Shotwell (DVX100A)

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nitroblitz

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Here is a scene from a short film that I shot with the DVX100A. Hope you enjoy it.

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I AGREE
 
Audio was terrible... the choice of shooting in an industrial stairwell is the first part of that. Too much natural reverb in the dialog is very, very distracting. And some of the dialog edits were very obvious. Those can be smoothed out, but as reverberant as the dialog was I don't think it would save the sound here.

Lighting was inconsistent between the two actors... it was like they were in two different places with two different light sources.

The script concept was funny... delivery was okay, but could have used a little more polish.
 
Thank you for the notes...

Thank you for the notes...

Thank you for the notes... please keep in mind that it was a rough cut from one of the scenes... we have doubled up the audio so it is much much much better now.
 
crossing of the imaginary line(180 degree axis) really bugged me the whole time. switching back and forth between the actors and them jumping from one side of the frame to the other.
 
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