Again - short drama with a little twist ;)

navitas

navitas

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Hi,

Few weeks ago we decided to make an independend something just to see if we are able to make a serious project some day. It's a short drama with a little twist ;)

Took one day to shoot.

Have fun watching!




Crew
Magda Mazurkiewicz
Maciej Białobrzeski
Paweł Mazurkiewicz
Sławomir Taboryski

music:
James Newton Howard - The Village OST
 
It looked cool, and you have a great location. Things that struck me: focus pulling. Can be used for artistic effect, but more often than not when something was out of focus in this and the depth of field was very shallow it just distracted me. Your rack focuses need work; the one where it reveals the fence seems unmotivated and doesn't show much, and racking from the gun sight to the target was too slow to be effective. Something between the relationship of the acting and the cinematography didn't seem to be able to evoke the intensity it should have when she was running from the building. Also some of the cutting from normal to high angle shots was a little distracting (when she initially leaves the building).

Overall, cool piece that keeps you watching. The steadicam work was nicely done, it's cool to have that in your arsenal. I'd say continue doing things like this until you really excel at the technical elements, working towards things more and more ambitious.
 
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