majikfraug
Well-known member
I'm so glad you're on the Top 8! Loved your film. Truly.
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We really enjoyed this film. That's first and foremost, it was really fun to watch more than one time. The production value alone would be worth a second watch. To carry my thoughts from the session, I think the issue I have with the story is that it is very safe, and by that I mean it doesn't really branch out emotionally or story-wise into any specific area. You touch on a whole lot of small elements about these two characters, but never really tell us much more than that. I think you could have chosen one or two elements in the movie and expanded them more vs. trying to get them all in. For instance, the majority of the front end word play is comprised with fairly standard concerns, e.g. Rick is annoyed he's up at 3 AM, annoyed at Noam's arrogance, disbelief in time travel, concerns about what will happen, what most anyone would feel in that situation. And then right before they push the button, you throw an emotional bomb out with the "giving up/growing up" line, something that would carry some real emotional weight between these two guys, and it's brushed aside right away. ACK! Would have really liked to seen some sort of story line develop between these two, instead of the more (by comparison) superficial conversation they do have.
Who was the gaffer? I know this is a strange question, but I am very interested in how the lighting was done.