I'd like to hear any other comments, suggestions, critiques, whatever other word that basically says the same thing as the other three here...
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Being that I was having a day w/ my daughter I didnt have any shoulder mount/IS and the likeness.. So outside of the shakyness, I'd like opinions
this was just so nice. your daughter looks really really happy in the video which means you nailed it and who gives a dang about the shoulder mount anyway??? i thought it was a really good idea to show the "in-between" moments (on the bus) because its the everyday which disappears so fast and becomes more precious over time. Also a really great idea to turn the camera onto you, even if for a second, it humanizes the POV, makes it poignant. Congratulations on this!