Well put together. I did catch your hand in a picture from though lol, but it didn't bother me - just bringing it to your attention if you didn't catch it. What program did you use for the pretty vignette, it added a wonderful touch.
Just to be fair (since I've been posting this on other threads as well), might I remind you that there is a special section for us to share footage.
there. Someone had to say it.
The edit at :20 seconds looks weird and just very un-natural. You have what seems to be a gliding camera coming from right to left which passes the brides face and then the next cut is to the center of her face?
I would have done a gliding from behind and then end with a cut to her face, but not past... It looks like a jump cut honestly. I would either add a dissolve or cut the scene before you glide all the way past her.