But, for me the tight shot was too tight for what you are doing here. And I would have preferred a wider shot in there as well. See the whole person then the CU. Persona preferences only.
The sound let it down. It wasnt up to par with the rest.
Thanks guys....on the sound, that was the AGC "kicking in". Mic was very nice.
I wanted to have more " in your face/hard cut" feel to it.Lesson learned, never capture sound in in to an apartment with 7d. I was able to hear(on playback) the neighbors, and their neighbors.
Colors are really rich and vibrant which was very well done. Agree with the posting about the shots being too tight - would've thrown in a couple wide shots
Personally based on the content of the PSA, i would've desaturated more than anything but that's just my $0.02.