Creative aside, I really like the shot composition and color grading. BUT, I think you need a better tripod and/or dolly setup. The camera moves were a little bouncy for me, which is a shame, because everything else was SO good.
My girlfriend asked me if I would make some fotos last week. I said yes and we walk around and search a place..
Suddenly I found this car on a industry. I shot some fotos there for her. I had no trypod and a 50mm lens without IS.
I just shot some scenes and when I was at home I loved the car shoots and had the Idea for a commercial.
I will do it right with a nicer oldtimer car, nicer background AND A TRIPOD AND WITH MY IS LENS!!! :=(