7D - 1st music video - want feedback

[NojFilms]

My 1st music video, looking for constructive feedback.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mLPs76Pl15U

I came up with the concept, wrote the treatment, directed, shot and edited the piece. Shot on a Canon 7D, 70-200mm 2.8 L IS for all shots, miller compact II tripod and fluid head, edited on FCE.

 

[Jay Laville]

Was some nice shots, just one thing though how long was that walk path, just seemed distracting because one minute he was at the end of it then he was in the middle then at end then at beginning, lol, nice to have him at different location, and different shots, reall close up with guy speaking in ear, or even side shot or nostril shot or something. Nice work though

 

[Cieloent]

My 1st music video, looking for constructive feedback.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mLPs76Pl15U

I came up with the concept, wrote the treatment, directed, shot and edited the piece. Shot on a Canon 7D, 70-200mm 2.8 L IS for all shots, miller compact II tripod and fluid head, edited on FCE.

Nod bad, but it needs more. If you wanted to use that one long walkway scene you need to give the audience more angles , not only from the front. Try some first person angles, side angle, behind him angles, etc.


Start the video more interesting, end it more interesting. Overall the quality looks very good it just seems incomplete. I would have another day of shooting to incorporate a beginning, ending and at least 10+ more camera angles.