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60D short film- INTRUDER
- Thread starter mashbatbros
- Start date
mashbatbros
New member
Well done! The dialogue levels could be boosted in some areas though.
thank you
vision_filmz
Carbonite Member
Pretty good, except a few things which threw me off.
In the restaurant scene I could the lights in the glass also overall the short film seemed rather dark. Did not like the "grain" you added as well, personally it didn't need it. What I did like was the pacing, framing and pretty good acting. I think with a couple of more projects under your belt you can have something nice.
In the restaurant scene I could the lights in the glass also overall the short film seemed rather dark. Did not like the "grain" you added as well, personally it didn't need it. What I did like was the pacing, framing and pretty good acting. I think with a couple of more projects under your belt you can have something nice.
Ricky Perrone
Active member
Dude that was great, really liked it. Very well framed and exposed shots and a cool story.
mashbatbros
New member
Pretty good, except a few things which threw me off.
In the restaurant scene I could the lights in the glass also overall the short film seemed rather dark. Did not like the "grain" you added as well, personally it didn't need it. What I did like was the pacing, framing and pretty good acting. I think with a couple of more projects under your belt you can have something nice.
I agree about the lighting. It definitely could have been lit better. Thanks for your feedback. Appreciate it