4 Walls - Short Film

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4 Walls - Short Film

The first short narrative film I directed, produced and edited along with some great actors and people who helped me create this piece for my graduation project.

Synopsis: A life of a disturbed corrupt addict who stops to
realize what is the real essence of his existence.

The Film Won the Award for the Best Narrative Film In Zayed Film Festival 2011.

Director: Ibrahim Hodroj
Writers: Yehia Rashed - Muhammed El Ayat
Producers: Omar El Deeb - Ibrahim Hodroj
Cinematographer: Ibrahim Hodroj
Editor: Ibrahim Hodroj

Subtitles : English

Link: http://www.vimeo.com/24074304
 
I enjoyed the film very much. Was technically very well executed, the camera work, the shot structure and especially the editing were of the highest quality. The story is very well told, and the actors did an amazing job, especially the main character. The only thing that stood out was that this being a heavy dialogue driven film, I didn't feel the drama as much as I wanted to, I didn't feel his pain, and I couldn't really feel his dilema and anguish. I believe that if this film were to be done again without half the dialogue and told mainly through visuals would be a much more powerful film.

But nonetheless its a very good piece of work. Well done!
 
popzz said:
Thanks man!! Any comments on the movie? would appreciate ur feedback!
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I like it very much.
Very well done, very nice cinematography and editing work.
The acting was pretty good too, only thing I noticed is the guys smoking cigarettes on the bench and inside the car doesn't look realistic. I mean cigarette smoke looks great on movies, but I think is over used and it is not necessary to tell a story. I know this one involved drugs and stuff, but that was my feeling, maybe the actors didn't do a good job at smoking? :P
But you shortfilm was great! Congratz!
 
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