30 Second Easter Commercial shot in Paris

[blazer003]

Easter commercial shot in Paris and in our studio. Comments and critiques are appreciated.

 

[Justin Kuhn]

Could have used more shots. It seemed to move slowly which is not great for a 30 spot.

 

[j1clark@ucsd.edu]

Easter commercial shot in Paris and in our studio. Comments and critiques are appreciated.

I don't that the second 'cave wall' works. Saw it once, then the next 'difference' between the opulence of Napoleon's Tomb vs. the "Jesus Tomb", should have been 'something else'...

On the other hand, since your voice over text indicates 'Jesus isn't in the tomb any more'... perhaps some imagery that shows an 'open tomb', or moving shot exiting a crypt...